Below is the first draft of our music video and the feedback that we received in order for us to improve.
Feedback:
What works well?
This video has made us smile! The commitment from the performers is brilliant! It made us feel like he was a voyager and then went on a trip!
Some really lovely shots - we liked the overlapping of the typewriter!
Storyline is clear - gone to find creatures in the wood! We liked it when he found the headpiece!
Even Better If
Shots are a little too long
Needs lip syncing a little earlier
More performance needed
Try to cut to the beat a little more
Would the weird people in the wood wear converse?
A few camera wobbles in the middle
Can you add in a shot where they come together after she reaches out to the voyager?
From this feedback we plan to cut down the clips so that they don't feel to lengthy and cut them to the beat. We also plan to cut out the camera wobbles and refine some others with digital stabilisation. We will also investigate different ways we can implement lip syncing/performance earlier into the video.
From this feedback we plan to cut down the clips so that they don't feel to lengthy and cut them to the beat. We also plan to cut out the camera wobbles and refine some others with digital stabilisation. We will also investigate different ways we can implement lip syncing/performance earlier into the video.
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