This is our second draft for our music video with feedback below.
Feedback
What works well
Nice use of sepia in the explorer scenes
Varied number of shot types
Even better if
Sort the focus out on some shots - the shot is not in focus and then changes
Need more of a link between the narrative - the creatures in the wood and the explorer (add in a black and white photograph that the explorer has on his desk
Why does the explorer have a girlie hand on the reach out?
With this feedback we plan to investigate the focus on the relevant shots and work out whether we can digitally fix them or if we will have to replace/re-shoot them. We will also try adding in a shot of the explorer looking at a photo of the other performer early on in the video and see how that effects the narrative; if good we may also add in similar shots later in the video. We will also re-shoot the shot of the hands or manipulate the existing clip to perform a gender-switch.
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